MidnightPlease's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tea]

like the style you have going n , it shows promise

there is a crude good baseline in your work, it all needs polishing and some more techincal skill , but the heart might be there.

also in my humble opion, stick to cute/creepy stuff like this and stay away from porn , unless your going to make some original porn ( i like your hat 3 is funny in a way ) yes i'm not sticking to the pic in my review oh well

[Motivational Anime! waiting]

i like it , its . . . honest.

good 'old inkt n paper for the win.

RemixF2D responds:

hey thx =)

[La Fille du Marais]

Amazing as always, yet this one sticks out, if this was a comic cover i'd buy that comic pronto.

your best one yet, also is she somehow related to "murder in the toilets"? suit n weapon look familiar.

Anyway one of the best pics in the art portal congrats and thanx for that extra pic of her in your Ng blog thingie . . . nameless swampgirl yeah!

Ephyse responds:

Thx :)
you got the eye! yes she is the one in the murder in the toilet, the same girl 10years older :)

[Clunk]

nice

drop the shadow thou no need for that .

background ? ah well.

( sweet )

[-SUTEREO-]

love the style

but i'm afraid some of the appeal is lost in by not using the composition to its limit .
the backgrounds are amazingly detailed , but there stealing the show frow the characters a little , and their desing being cool even if akira feels a little too 'safe' (nothing that realy stands out on her, except for headphones ) but their poses are a little too dull ( positive critism here still love it overal >_<) as far as poses and interaction bewteen these master /servant characters i'd recomend some of the artworks on the shin megami persona video game series or jojo's bizzare adventure manga , these realy manage to bring out a kind of tension bewteen the two , while any relation not between akira and 7 not detailed in your comments is abscent in the drawing itself . also the use of the cd as 'weapon' could have been highlighted through more clever use of composition thinking pokeballs here a little , still overal great potential and yes if this wasn't ficional it would rock the dojin market dojin dojinshi whatever the spelling was . i hope to see some more of your stuff on the ng art portal , keep in mind composition !!